Dude, to be honest, that is the worst singing voice I have ever heard. Maybe if you work on your singing, then work on your guitar playing, you could be alright, but until then, don't put your songs on here.
I liked this song a lot. Nice sounds, could have blended a tad better but overall very smooth. You should continue this work. Go9od job and nice effort.
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